So far I have focused on the last part of the book during Week 5. There is a lot of smoothing, bridging and typographical activity that needs to happen from this point forward.
The story also ended with a focus on humanity's need to be in harmony with nature. This was not part of the original purpose but it fits with the ending so I will be looking for ways to enhance that purpose as I complete my first editing pass. The story will mature during these editing phases.
As stated in my last post, each week will have the entire book in its current state of editing. That way anyone who is interested can see how the story slowly matures.
As always, use your imagination and exercise the greatest gift bestowed upon mankind, the ability to create form from thought.